Monday 13 March 2017

The Journey to Camp

        The Journey to Camp    
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I can see Sun reflecting off the water. Trees and
bushes are blowing in the wind. Cars are zooming past.  
Sheep baaing and sleeping while the weeds are growing everywhere like grass.                          
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  1. AnonymousMarch 24, 2017 11:53 am

    Bariliant discriptave language. I like how you discribed the lake and the trees, next time you could work on adding more punctuation like commas.
    Thanks, Alex w

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