Wednesday 8 March 2017

Rocky Island


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I can see dark shapes in the shallow water. Meanwhile the moist sand tickles my feet. On top of the rocks sits a green sea of friendly lizards. Far far away in the distance a boat sails by with monsters.

1 comment:

  1. Awesome setting of the scene here Jayden.

    Great work on starting sentences with different words. Sand tickles - that is an activated noun, making the sand do something. Great work for finding the difference between sales and sails.

    Whaea Allana

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